I just sit upon a writing desk, and write. And then, I tell stories. Legends of long ago.
I feel the ominous nature of the news inside this letter....the sky smelling of rust is such an original image.
Sometimes it is better to wait for the right time to open such a letter!
ha. i like that last one...one look can tell so much...and letters, i love them but they are not always good...
These three work so beautifully together...
I would be hesitating to open this letter...nicely done
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Scary letter...will it help to live next day....~ like your style
Great post...the words brought such a clear picture to me.
Ninot Ma'am'Harbinger of bad blood' that's awful. It creates that impression that its contents are anticipated and more or less known. Mysteriously beautiful.Hank
I would hesitate to open it also
Excellent ... been there...great capture of the moment.PeaceSiggi
oh letters sometimes could be so ominous .......nicely done
Not all news is good news ...perhaps no news ?
So very beautiful! Loved the writing!bridging the past with the future
Lovely, lovely haiku .......
"smells like rust"hot night blackenscicadas
A great trio. These really work.=)
Loved all three. Great work. :)
Trio of 'Wonderful' !!
*gasps* Amazingly written. :D
I can identify with the last one.
Oh, dear. A sad ending, from the beginning...
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You have such a way in doing this and it flows so well.
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